oh how i met u
there is some thing i can bet u,
no matter u believe me or not,
but certailny i will never forget u.
there is some thing i hav found in u,
i dont know how much starnger i may seem to u.
still i cant help my self loving u,
coz the one whom i hav searched for ,
its u and only u.
i dont care if u lov me or not,
i dont giv a damn if im urs or what,
but i do care for one thing,
for u to be in my dreams
from the beginning of every start.
18 comments:
lovely bro.........its very nice....
mast bola bhai.......ekdam sahiiiii........lekin ab agli hindi me honi chaiye KAVI" AKASH "
well its good to see that pandey finally stepping into the world of blogs and that too with one of his finest piece..words well framed..still fantasizing bout it..just trying to be a critic :P
hope i get someone ..someday for whom i can say these words :)
keep it up pandey..hope to see more from u in the coming days...
now i can say "some1 special can change nything n ny1 lyk sum1(PP) hs changed becz of sum1 special (PP)...
matlab ab ka likhen....sab kuchh to yahi likh diye...!!.....matlab karejwa ke tukde tukde kar diye........//
awesome!!!
GOOD USE RHYMES BABY.........KEEP WRITING...
good one yaar ..maza aagaya
akash agar yeh tumne likha hai to really awesome
achaa bhai hummmkkkooo nayyyyi batayoge apne iss anjane pyaar ke bare mai.......
aaree koi mere bhai ko iss kavi bana dene vali ladki se baaachaayoooooooo baaaachaayoooo......
hahaha........but its really really touching poem........glad to see yr feeling.......in form of yr peom:))
maal hae bhai..
wese yeh to shuruat hae aage yeh kavi bahut gul khilane walen hae....
very nice poem, i must say... appreciable effort. after reading this poem what i liked is its universal appeal, means it gives the feeling to every reader that the poem is the description of his heartfelt feelings. second good thing is the diction, u need not to understand the poem by going through diction again & again, “ mining for meaning is not required", it's all clear in first reading only what u have to do is just relish a fine piece of art...
well done... keep it up!!!!
u have described ur dream girl in such a manner as a renouned shayar has dercribed his dream girl.......
"kisi paagal kavi ki kalpna ho tum,
khud ko bhool jaun main vo nasha ho tum,
ab hosh aaye na kabhi to behtar hoga
sapna hi sahi, mera apna ho tum...."
really nyc,sir........simple n yet heart touching.....it says all
Hi, just today someone quoted that beautiful phrase for me (Jahan na pahuche ravi, vaha pahunche kavi). He didn't know the source. Do you know it?
Linn (from Germany. Unfortunatly I dont speak Hindi).
Hi, just today someone quoted that beautiful phrase for me (Jahan na pahuche ravi, vaha pahunche kavi). He didn't know the source. Do you know it?
Linn (from Germany. Unfortunatly I dont speak Hind
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